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improved

ummm ok it was goodish still the intro and sound but chap 5 sounds good cnt wait (well sorta can but hey)

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ok improvment

but still not cuting it the story is still bad and the sound also and the drawinds look like a rough sketch of a character and the intro is way to long, instead of using words animate it instead of explaning it( i know u did explan it in the last chapters therefore u dnt need to explan it again) but big improve ment well done on that

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great tut but

the hp thing aint wrking i did everything

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mmmmmm

needs alot of improvments:
some moving objects(eg the blood) was to hard to drag
there was lots of unused space
only 1 copy of each thing
the actual graphics needs improvement
but still it is a drag-n-drop

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copy

copy of animator vs animation by in a new stlye and i like it

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i agree

i agree not bad at all

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omg it sucks

its so lame i played 4 2lvls and got bored it is too easy and just lame i mean the only upgrades u get r ammo upgrades and u dnt even buy them

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i give it ten

zaxnort u weird i give it a ten 4 story and graphics and i saw a crappy thing had no graphics and no story and every1 loved it

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i agree

i agree with the dude below but it had somthing in it

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omg

omg it was crap i mean the oragami was cool but it was probs like 10fps omg
i mean stop motion isnt that hard

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